I wrote this for an Oregon Rivers anthology, and it got published! It's modeled after the rivers of southern Oregon.
I stand next to the river and watch it flow.
It’s a ribbon of liquid
ice, winding its way down the path, pulling the crystal light from the
sky and twisting it out into clear blue silk. It’s an ever-growing
source of life, wide and deep in some parts and snaking through forests
in others. It winds in and out of the trees, cutting little ripples as
it bounces over stones, spilling down the occasional waterfall.
My feet are bare and
sink into the spongy moss riverbed. I dip my hand into the water and cup
the clear brilliance in my palm before letting it spill through my
fingers. The sun created little sparkles, like tiny jewels, reflected
from the water. They’re so dazzling, so abstract.
The river is a bed of
gems, each sparkling with their own design and color. I can spot the
deep tones of cobalt, layered underneath sky blue, emerald, and crystal
white. Instead of being separate, though, they are blended together like
only the richest of paints, illustrating a beautiful portrait. The
mountains peek up in the background; tall, majestic giants overlooking
everything, dusted with snow. I know that the snow will soon melt and
flow down the great hillside, eventually merging with this grand body of
water, giving us the sweet water we have now. It’s icy cold, but clear,
letting the sunlight illuminate the bottom.
What seems like fathoms
below, nature lies. Microscopic bugs dart near the surface, basking in
the sunlight, nibbling on bits of plants. Small turtles and snakes lurk
on the riverbed, lying in a shallow pool, well hidden away. Further out,
salmon swim fiercely on, only stopping for the most urgent matters.
Like stoic soldiers, they brave the current, determined to reach their
destination in time. River otters, a rare treat, frolic beneath the
waves, coming up to rest on shore after their fun has ended for the day.
I sit out on the bank
for a long time. Far ahead, the river stretches out to embrace the land,
and behind me it is just a creek through the forest. In my cutoff
jeans, streaked with mud from clambering over rocks to get here, I sit
on a flat stone and wait, staring off into the distance.
Eventually, the sun dips
behind the mountains, letting off spectacular rays of golden orange as
it sinks. Birds fly over the water, silhouetted in the light. With the
absence of wind, I can see fish jumping, creating little splashes here
and there. The trees are harder to make out now, just bundles of pine
blanketing the hills. An owl hoots behind me, and I feel a sudden chill
as darkness sets in.
“Honey, are you out
here?” It’s my mother, her silhouette stepping carefully over the rocks
to get to me. “It’s time to come in. It’s getting dark.”
I smile and look out over the river.
“Just a minute.”
~I was going to call it The River Song, but it has no relevance whatsoever, soooo...~
The imagery is gorgeous and very poetic. Brava.
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